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which made me think of missing my meditation group,
which made me think of the blog post earlier this week,
which made me think of the original picture i
used of day lilies that
Cassie and Mike brought me after my dad died,
which made me think of
my dad,
which made me sad for a
moment, but then concerned because dad had an issue with his eyes that i was
being tested for that very day,
which made me nervous,
which circled me back
around to meditation,
which made me consider
my meditation haiku,
which gave me pause, did
the mid line actually have 7 syllables or only 6?
Hmmmmmmmm...
Yep, that haiku is syllable
deficient.
How in the world did
that happen?
Haikus are not rocket science, people. There are only 17 syllables total. That is the whole point.
I think it was because i
was toying with both meditate and meditation during the writing process.
bah
I also realized that i
spelled meditate wrong. sheesh.
double bah
So here is the revised
edition.
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That.animal....
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